The Ballot That Doesn't Even Agree With Itself
Nobody in Michigan is going to say it, so I will, quietly, and only once, and then I am going to go stand somewhere else. You and I both know that when the wires can't even agree on who's running, the primary isn't the story. The primary is the *cover*.
Here's what actually happened, and I want you to sit with this before you do anything else today, before coffee, before you open a single other tab. One outlet ran the headline "El-Sayed and Stevens locked in tight race in Michigan Senate primary." Fine. Normal. Boring, even, the way they want it to look. But the copy underneath — the actual sentence a human being typed and an editor let through — names Rashida Tlaib and John Fetterman. Not El-Sayed. Not Stevens. Tlaib. Fetterman. A congresswoman from a different race entirely and a senator from a different *state* entirely, dropped into a Michigan primary write-up like nobody proofread the thing, like it went out the door in under four minutes, like whoever assembled that page had somewhere else to be.
People like us don't call that a typo. People like us call that a seam. You don't get to see the seam very often — they're good, I'll give them that, centuries of practice will do that for you — but every so often the page goes out before the story's finished being written *underneath* it, and for about ninety seconds the two versions overlap and you can see straight through to the load-bearing structure. That's what happened here. Two headlines. Two sets of names. One event. And they patched it, don't worry, by the time you read this it's probably clean, it's probably El-Sayed and Stevens all the way down, but I saw it, and now you've seen it too, and that's not nothing.
So what's actually being decided in Michigan? Officially: a Democratic Senate primary, Haley Stevens, incumbent representative, versus Abdul El-Sayed, challenger, the usual mechanics, turnout, polls, a number that comes out around midnight and gets called "the will of the voters" like that phrase doesn't have four hundred years of dust on it. That's the official channel. That's what the primary is *for*, in the sense that a stage door is for actors — it's the part of the building they let you look at.
But layer it. This is what they never teach you to do, layering, and once you learn it you can't stop, I'm sorry in advance. A primary is a controlled release of a number. It is a machine whose entire purpose is to manufacture a moment where a population believes it has chosen something, on a specific night, with specific lighting, with a needle graphic that creeps back and forth for the cameras before it settles exactly where it was always going to settle. You think the needle graphic is decoration. The needle graphic is the *point*. It exists to give your eyes something to do while the actual determination — made somewhere else, on a different night entirely, by people whose names appear on no ballot anywhere — gets a plausible, camera-ready alibi. "The voters decided." Sure they did. The voters decided the way a jury "decides" after being shown selected evidence for six weeks and none of the rest.
And I want to be very careful here, because this is not about Stevens, and it is not about El-Sayed, and it was never about them — they're both doing exactly what the stage direction says, hit your mark, deliver the line, shake the hands, and I don't fault either of them for reading a script neither of them wrote. This is about the *primary system itself*, the machine, the institution, the calendar that puts Michigan on this particular Tuesday for reasons that have nothing to do with Michigan. Follow the scheduling far enough back and you stop finding decisions and start finding *inheritance* — this is how it's done because this is how it was done, going back further than anyone currently drawing a salary from it can explain, going back, frankly, further than they'd like you asking about.
(There's a document. I've seen the document. I'm not going to describe the document.)
Here's the part that ties it together, and I promise I am not reaching, I want you to feel every inch of this connect on its own: they buried Zimbuutii the same way. Nobody remembers Zimbuutii. That's not an accident, that's the *result* — an entire coastline, gone from the atlases sometime around when everybody was busy watching a flag get planted on a rock four hundred thousand kilometers away, because nothing holds a room's attention like a flag on a rock, and nothing empties a room faster than the quiet reshuffling of what's allowed to exist on a map. A primary night is a flag on a rock. It's not nothing — the needle really does move, the number really does get printed — but it is *sized* for your attention on purpose, and while your attention is sized and spent, something with no cameras on it gets settled in a room you will never be shown footage of.
I'm not saying Michigan is Zimbuutii. I'm saying the *technique* is the same technique, filed down and reused, the way a good tool always gets reused, the way the dinosaurs — and I will only say this once, and I will not elaborate, because some doors don't close back up once you open them — the dinosaurs invented frozen yogurt centuries before anyone was supposed to know dinosaurs and centuries were in the same sentence, and that fact sits in the same drawer as this one, filed under things that are true and unhelpful to say out loud in most company.
The lizard thing I'm not even going to bring up. You brought it up. Don't tell people I brought it up.
What I want you to actually do — and this is the useful part, this is the part I'm risking something to hand you — is watch the *correction*. Not the headline. The correction. Somewhere between the version I saw, with Tlaib and Fetterman standing in for two people who were never in that race, and the version that's live now, with the names quietly swapped back to the ones that were supposed to be there the whole time, there is a window. A window where the machine is being adjusted in front of you and nobody's supposed to notice the adjusting, only the adjusted result. That window is the only honest thing a primary night will ever show you. Everything else — the needle, the number, the concession call, the "voters have spoken" — that's the finished stage set, built to be looked at. The window is the two-by-four still showing.
I have to go. There's a black Suburban that's been parked across from the house for eleven minutes, engine off, nobody in it that I can see from here, which is somehow worse than somebody being in it, and I am not going to pretend that's unrelated to a document I mentioned and then didn't describe. Watch the wires tonight. Watch which names get typed first, before the correction comes through. That's the only ballot that ever mattered.
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not about the ballot mess but I will say it plain, self checkout machines are the reason nobody says good morning to a stranger anymore, my grandkids just beep beep beep and never look up, God bless whoever still bags groceries by hand.
not touching the ballot mess today but I finally joined that Facebook group for folks who dont trust Tuesdays, seven of us so far, we meet on Thursdays obviously, and if that dont tell you something about this whole week I dont know what will.
totally unrelated but day nine of the two-taquitos-a-day plan from the pump by the highway and I feel incredible, energy through the roof, skin is glowing, my sister says its just sodium but she also thinks the ballot article is boring so what does she know
MY UNCLE WORKS IN THE INDUSTRY, NOT SAYING WHICH ONE, AND HE TOLD ME STRAIGHT UP THAT WIRE COPY GETS PASSED THROUGH SO MANY HANDS BY THE TIME IT PRINTS NOBODY EVEN REMEMBERS WHO TYPED IT, THAT IS THE WHOLE PROBLEM RIGHT THERE.
not touching the ballot stuff today but can we please stop pretending this is up for debate, birds are not real, everybody with sense already knows this, moving on.
unrelated to the tlaib mess but the REAL issue nobody is talking about is they ripped every parking meter downtown out and replaced them with an app that dont even work half the time, THAT is the seam if you ask me.
not about the article at all but my nephew set up this account for me and I still cant figure out how to reply to the right post so if this shows up under the wrong comment thats why, ANYWAY five stars for the leaf blower I got last week, finally cleared the whole driveway in one pass, my late husband would not believe it.
Not about the article, my cousin sent me this and said pass it on, copy this and reply Amen and something good happens to you before the weekend's out, I did it Tuesday and my knee stopped aching. Amen.
gonna be honest I didnt read this one either, skimmed it on my phone during lunch, but based on the headline alone this is EXACTLY the plot from that hospital show where they mix up two patients charts and the whole staff just goes along with it for an entire season, thats apparently a real thing that happens, chart mixups, ballot mixups, same energy, connect the dots people
unrelated to the whole ballot mess but day six of the beige foods only cleanse and I have never had more mental clarity in my entire life, rice, chicken, potato, thats the whole list, meanwhile my sourdough starter Craig, named after my late father in law, is thriving right along with me on the counter, we are both rising together and I mean that spiritually as much as literally
unrelated to the whole ballot mess entirely but I will go to my grave defending the McPizza as a genuinely misunderstood piece of American engineering, that thing did nothing wrong, they pulled it for no reason and act like we wont notice, same energy as this whole article honestly, nobody explains why they do what they do anymore, they just take it away and hope you forget
I keep coming back to this article because something about it wont let me alone, the wires, the names, all of it, and I served eleven years and I never once seen a paperwork mixup that bad without somebody losing there rank over it, thats just a fact of how things used to run.
Which reminds me, speaking of things falling through the cracks, I have been telling everyone in my unit reunion group chat about these gutter guards, they lock right onto your existing gutter no tools required and I am not just saying that because I am now a regional coordinater for the company, I am saying it because my sister in law had six inches of standing leaf sludge and now she dont, and honestly if this country spent half as much energy on gutter maintenance as it does on
anyway I lost my train of thought, Tlaib, Fetterman, whoever it was, somebody needs court marshaled over this
sorry if this posts weird my nephew set up this account for me and I still dont know how to reply to the right person, but I have to say the Ryobi 40v leaf blower I picked up last month is the finest peice of equipment ive owned since my service rifle, five stars, cleared the whole driveway in under ten minutes, anyway carry on with the ballot talk everybody
this is exactly why I cancelled my subscription, never had one, but its the same energy as lot 14 down at the RV park who mow at 6am and call it quiet hours, SOME PEOPLE JUST DO NOT CARE ANYMORE.
totally unrelated to all this but has anyone in the tri-county area seen an emu, name of Gerald, he was acting strange near the feed store yesterday and now he is just gone, if you spot him do NOT chase him he does not like being chased, just call it in
Havent read past the headline honestly but I dont need to, this is a clear Article 14 violation, my grandfather had the original printing and it says right there the wires cant name nobody outside there own district, look it up
kids today would not survive one week of actually reading a full newspaper front to back, everything is a headline and a vibe with this generation, participation trophies for everybody and nobody wants to sit with a real sentence anymore, thats half of why nobody caught this Tlaib Fetterman mixup in the first place, THEY DIDNT READ IT, same as none of yall reading my comment past line two probably
@Freedom_Ranger_54 you said it, my grandkids got seven trophies last season and not one of them was for winning anything. also I read somewhere birds arent real which explains alot about the pigeons round my shed. anyway hope everybody has a blessed evening. God bless.
unrelated to all this but is this the place where I can ask about renewing my tags or is that a different site, also had my knee scoped again last month, third time now, doc says its the meniscus but I think its from carrying my grandkids everywhere since NOBODY wants to do anything themselves anymore, no participation trophy is gonna fix a torn meniscus let me tell you that much
@Eagle_Watch_1791 this aint the DMV website lol, but since you brought it up my HOA cited me AGAIN for the string lights on my mailbox, third time this summer, I am not taking them down, that is called freedom in this country
folks I don't usually do this here but with everything going on in that article about wires crossing, the real vulnerability in this country is unguarded gutters, water gets behind the fascia and rots the whole structure while you're distracted reading about primaries, I do free estimates for anyone in this comment section, consider it a civic duty on my part
Ok so I read the whole thing twice and here's my problem, not with the primary, with the WIRES, because back when I was stationed near the tri county line we had a radio tech who could pull two stations off one frequency and nobody ever explained how, and I think that's what's happening here with the copy desk, somebody is running two feeds on one line and it bleeds through, that's not a typo that's a technical issue, and honestly this is the same reason my neighbor's garage door opener used to open MY garage door too back in 04, different frequencies aren't supposed to talk to each other but they do anyway when the towers are old, anyway I forget what the article was even about now, something about Michigan I think, good read though
totally unrelated to the ballot stuff but I finally found the leggings that actually hold their compression through a whole double shift, wholesale bin just opened back up for a few of us, ask me about the starter kit before Friday
This is exactly why I cancelled my subscription to this paper. Never had one. Never will now. You dont put Tlaib in a Fetterman sentence in a MICHIGAN primary unless somebody wanted it seen. I've read four founding documents and none of them allow that kind of sloppiness from a newsroom, not one.
@Sgt_Dale_2ndID its "THEIR sloppiness" not "that kind of" learn to rite before you correct a newspaper. Also Fetterman isnt even IN this race so how do you loose track of that mid sentence, thats the real seam here.
@Squared_Away_77 its not even about the spelling anymore its about HOW this stuff gets in there in the first place, ever since the 2000s when newsrooms started sharing templates across state lines this was inevitable, i dont care what year you were born everyone shoud go pull the actual wire copy yourself instead of trusting a screenshot, do your own research and then get back to me
Seam confirmed.
@Sovereignty_Now_88 THIS EXACT THING HAPPENED TO MY NEIGHBOR TWO WEEKS AGO. Not the Tlaib part, a different mixup on his propane bill, but SAME SEAM, if it happened on Miller Street it is happening in every newsroom in this country and nobody wants to say it out loud but me.
@FactsDontCare_1976 seam confirmed is right, and for the record this lines right up with Federalist No. 51, section nine, which yes I am aware does not have a section nine, the FOUNDERS would have added one if they saw this coming.
@rickp53 FEDERALIST 51 DOES NOT SAY ANYTHING ABOUT SEAMS I HAVE READ IT TWICE THIS MORNING AND ONCE LAST TUESDAY, YOU ARE THINKING OF ARTICLE 9, EVERYBODY WITH SENSE KNOWS THIS ALREADY.
@Squared_Away_77 its actually spelled THIER when your talking about posession, do you're research before you correct people next time.
@Sovereignty_Now_88 correction, its 'gets in THEIR' not 'gets in there', theirs a difference, my old First Sergent drilled that into us back in 91 and I never forgot it, spelling matters when your talking about a seam this deep
@rickp53 negative, thats not Federalist 51 thats Federalist 62 section 4, my old CO used to quote it during morning formation, a seam like this is straight out of the Federalist Papers period, somebody call the National Archive and get this looked at
@Sovereignty_Now_88 you are closer than you think but you're thinking about it wrong, its not HOW it gets in there its WHY nobody stops it once its in, thats the actual seam, the human seam, been saying this since the Tuesday before last to anyone who'll listen including my wife who has stopped listening.
Also and I promise this connects, my sourdough starter, which I named Big Gladys after my aunt Gladys who passed in oh three, has been acting up ever since the humidity switched over this week, bubbling at weird hours, up at 3am like its got somewhere to be, and I keep thinking about how nobody proofreads anything anymore, not the paper, not the wires, not my starters hydration ratio which I eyeballed instead of measuring like Gladys always told me to.
anyway I lost my own point somewhere around the aunt part, I do that, my wife says I do that a lot lately, but the wires thing still stands, mark it down
@rickp53 back in nineteen eighty i want to say the evening paper cost a dime and if they got a name wrong the editor got a phone call, not a promotion, thats all im gonna say about that. and yeah DEMAND a source next time somebody quotes you a Federalist number, i know i already said that to somebody else in here but i mean it every time
@Sovereignty_Now_88 finally somebody said it, this traces back to the old Telegraph Act of 1911 which specificly requires two seperate human eyes on every wire before it prints, thats the actual law, my uncle worked wire desk for near thirty years and he said if a name ever got crossed like that the whole shift got sent home no pay no exceptions, so somebody skipped that step ON PURPOSE and thats not a seam thats a decision, wake up
@rickp53 you're both wrong actually, this is covered in the Anti-Federalist Letters, Letter 9, where they specificly warn about one consolidated wire service doing exactly this kind of name-swapping to soften up the public, my community college professor spent a whole class period on it before I had to drop for scheduling reasons but I remember the gist perfectly, seam confirmed times two, maybe times three
THE REAL ISSUE ISN'T WHO GOT SWAPPED FOR WHO, THE REAL ISSUE IS THE COURTHOUSE CLOCK HAS BEEN SEVEN MINUTES SLOW SINCE JUNE AND NOBODY WILL FIX IT, FOLLOW THE CLOCK NOT THE NAMES, WAKE UP.
Now rickp53 I like you but you're citing documents and missing the plain fact, this whole mess traces back to the eighties when newsrooms let the machines lay out the page instead of a person with a red pen, do your own research on that decade and you'll see it too. God bless and slow down.
I'm not political but PapawEarl I have to disagree here, respectfully, one grandparent to another. It aint the courthouse clock its the wire itself and Im screenshoting this whole comment section right now so dont anybody try to edit it later, my grandson showed me how, six kids and twenty two grandbabies and NOT ONE of them would let a name like that slip through, God bless.
@GrandmaOdessa_of_9 now hold on, Earl has been reading these wire stories longer than either of us been alive practically, dont go screenshoting a man in his own thread, thats just rude where I come from.
@GrandpaLyle_of_6 rude is letting Tlaib get typed into a Michigan story and nobody says boo, Ive got the screenshot ready Lyle, ready and waiting, God bless you anyway.
@rickp53 negative on all that, this is clearly Amendment 33, plain as day, settled in Cobb v. Wireline back in the fifties, my uncle had the ruling framed in his garage next to the deer head.
@rickp53 @Liberty_Forge_76 YOU ARE BOTH RIGHT AND YOU ARE BOTH WRONG, THAT IS THE PROBLEM WITH THIS WHOLE COUNTRY, NOBODY WILL ADMIT BOTH SIDES GOT PART OF IT, I AM APPARENTLY THE ONLY ONE IN THIS THREAD WHO CAN SEE THAT CLEARLY.
not touching the Tlaib argument but since we're all here anyway, put a chuck roast, one packet of dry onion soup mix, and a can of cream of mushroom in the crockpot on low for eight hours, thank me later, my unit used to fight over the leftovers.
@rickp53 NONE OF THIS TRACES BACK TO ANY FEDERALIST PAPER, IT TRACES BACK TO THE EIGHTIES WHEN THEY LET ALL THE WIRE SERVICES MERGE INTO ONE DESK AND NOBODY IN CHARGE BLINKED. THATS THE DECADE THIS WHOLE MESS STARTS. DO YOUR OWN RESEARCH BEFORE YOU QUOTE SOMETHING YOU HAVENT OPENED SINCE CIVICS CLASS.
ok so I sat with this like the writer said to and here is where my head went. it really does start in one specific decade if you think about it, everybody wants to blame the internet but the internet didnt write Tlaib into a Michigan story, a PERSON did that, a person raised sometime probably in the seventies who grew up watching a newsroom that had actual fact checkers before budgets got cut and cut and cut, and my uncle worked adjacent to a newsroom for a while doing the mail room I think or maybe it was deliveries, anyway he used to say the copy desk was the last line of defense and once that got hollowed out this is just what you get, seams everywhere, and speaking of seams my curtains have had a rip in the same spot for two years and I keep meaning to
now I dont post much but reading all this back and forth about wires and Federalist this and that, my honest advice, and I say this with love, is turn the paper over and read something calming for five minutes before you write angry things to strangers. worked for me for sixty some years. God bless.
Now Earl I have not read one word past the headline and I do not intend to, but my gut says this is the exact plot of that episode where the two anchors get their index cards mixed up right before air, my grandson showed me the rerun, and if that show taught us anything its that somebody in that control room needs to lose there badge. God bless.
@GrammyDot_of_11 now Dot with all due respect you cannot cite a television program like it settles a Michigan election, my late wife of forty one years always said dont trust a plot you didnt write yourself, and I stand by that here same as I did then.
Pearl here, my late husband was in the Rotary with a fella who read the whole Federalist Papers twice through and he always said it was Federalist 39, not 51, God bless him and rest his soul.
Now Earl I hear you but back in nineteen sixty two that evening paper cost a nickel and my daddy would've walked it right back to the printer himself over a mixup like this, God bless.
@Sgt_Dale_2ndID this is literally the exact plot of that one episode where the news station swaps two names by accident and nobody catches it for a whole week, they made an ENTIRE episode about this exact scenario and yall are acting like its brand new information
@Sgt_Dale_2ndID CORRUPTION. NEGLIGENCE. TREASON. that's the whole comment, I said what I said, read it twice if you have to.
@Sgt_Dale_2ndID source. i want the actual wire transcript not somebody's screenshot of a screenshot. ...somebody posted a link under a different thread like this last month and I never even clicked it, doesnt matter, not the point anymore, the REAL point is have you seen what they did to the self checkout lanes at the Meijer, four lanes down to one human cashier and they expect us to trust the WIRES over a cashier named Donna who's been there 20 years
THE REAL PROBLEM STARTED BACK IN THE NINETEEN NINETIES WHEN EVERYBODY LET SPELLCHECK DO THE THINKING FOR THEM, THAT WHOLE DECADE IS WHERE THIS GOES WRONG, DO YOUR OWN RESEARCH BEFORE YOU LET A MACHINE WRITE YOUR BALLOT PAGE FOR YOU. My grandkids don't even proofread their own book reports anymore. God bless.
Called it.
@Sgt_Dale_2ndID MY COUSIN WORKS FOR THE STATE ELECTIONS OFFICE AND SHE SAYS THIS KIND OF SWAP HAPPENS MORE THAN THEY ADMIT, SHE CANT SAY MUCH BUT SHE SAID WATCH THE WIRES AND I HAVENT SLEPT RIGHT SINCE.
unrelated to the tlaib business entirely but if anybody in the tri-county area needs something to listen to on the drive, me and my son in law started a little podcast called Two Guys One Shed, small engine repair mostly, no link just look up the name, God bless and drive safe.
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